I can't read and understand Korean but based on your screenshot, I'm able to find the respective English version of the page in my Confluence 6.7.2 and they look like this:
With the English text, I'm able to trace the Korean translation to 2 of the lines here:
As I can't understand Korean to know which one of them have mistakes in them, you can help to re-translate them into a correct text following the guide here:
Hope this helps!
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